I know it’s a glacial lake
hence the hue–
unearthly erethral
more green than
blue I had seen
photos imagined it
for days and when
I went it looked
the same but
of course different
it’s a trick
being too well-versed
in imagination
I sometimes think
I know every thing
but then the tell
like some alpine
salamander
swimming out past
the wreck of
some half
-submerged log
casting tiny
ripples
minuscule shadows
but what a delight–
and the heard
not seen avalanches
cascading off
a semi-distant peak
all at once both sharp
and dull and I know
there’s still room
in this heart of mine
but oh what a ways
I go these days
to find
it–
“…too well versed in imagination” is a wonderful idea. Love that line.
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thank you, Carolin!
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But it’s worth the journey to find it (and your poems).
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Revealing deep of thought, such thought know the way to find the meaningful truth through life experiences, A great self reflection Poem.
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ECHOING OKAJI! Echoing Okaji… echoing okaji… echo–
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Them line breaks though!
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I have to wonder, would discovery be as sweet without the arduous toil of the journey? Lovely flow and imagery here. 🙂
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Musical. I loved it.
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thank you!
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Loved it!
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thank you!
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Love this one!
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“heard not seen”… just one of the great inventions of this poem…you reach what I always crave for: humility AND epic, strong as a drumbeat AND delicate as a “wingbeat”. Your words aren’t but tiny river pebbles, but they keep echoing as you let them fall on some cathedral’s ground…
thanks
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thank you for your kind words!
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Lovely rhythm in this piece, fantastic
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thank you!
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