The moon is the moon,
regardless. Some things
are certain, say,
great bodies of water,
stark mountains—
I return to them
as I return to you,
a pilgrim.
That is not to say
I believe
in much, only
that some things
are too familiar to deny,
even this moon, half
-eclipsed, playing at
garnet, even you,
now far again,
but still known, always
known, there is
a landscape,
a knowledge,
that cannot be denied—
when I first
saw your face
it was an act
of remembrance,
what else
is there to say?
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That moon, obstinate!
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The best 🙂
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Beautiful poem.
I’d experiment with the commas you use to see what they add/take away.
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Thanks, Tiegan
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Some things are indeed certain!
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Like a river flows surely to the sea…some things are meant to be I suppose Elvis had first dibs on the “large bodies of water” bit 🙂
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Beautiful and original poem!
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Thank you, Claire!
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I love this part the most:
when I first
saw your face
it was an act
of remembrance,
what else
is there to say?
Love is all about remembering.
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Thank you for your kind comment! It also seems paradoxical. Or whimsical? Droll? Certainly a theme worth returning to… 🙂
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I’m new here..but what a beautiful introduction this was. I love that it circled back to love in the end.
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Thanks for stopping by!
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You have an old soul. We recognise these things! That’s exactly the feel I was going for in Poetry (10). Lovely to have you back.
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Thanks Pola! Glad to be back 🙂
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A very lyrical expression!
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Thank you!
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