In all this fog
-heightened silence
ears strain
for a sudden noise,
the streets
exaggeratedly
empty, the shut up
glow of houses
so inaccessible,
no one will ever
walk these streets
again, except
there, under
a lampost’s sharp
cone, a figure,
attached to a dog,
or drowning
in place,
I’ll never know,
the white night
swallows it up
before I reach
that block,
and our floating
paths don’t
cross again.
Wow
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beautiful
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Thanks, robert!
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I like the cadence.
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Thanks, Jack
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A lot of people don’t realize the effects of proper cadence π©
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Great build up of atmosphere, mood, and voice. The separation between the walker and those in their homes is as simple as it is complex. (S)he is neither lonely nor content, just observant. The nearly shared experience between the two walkers is also phenomenal.
No one will ever walk these streets again. And the walkers will never cross paths again. Such truth! Because perception is subjection, time moves on, and we change every day, minute, second.
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Thanks Izzy, for your thoughtful take on the poem. Also, I like your typo ‘perception is subjection’ might be some truth in that as well! π
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*subjective π
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like it
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thanks!
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your welcome
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I love the idea of our paths as floating ones. There is some kind of honest assessment that even knowing the path does not mean one knows what is on either side of that path, or how deep the fall may be…as usual, great poem. Yawn. Could you write a bad one, please? just to shake up my world?
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Ha! I’ll see what I can do… a poet friend and I once set out to write the worst poem in the world, but couldn’t get past the opening line of ‘O, Rancid bumblebee’ Perhaps it’s time to revisit it? π
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Nice!
I wonder what drowning in place was meant to convey? Was it meant to be philosophical in accordance with the reader’s own personal experiences? (Atleast that’s what happened to me π )
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If that’s what happened, I’ll take it! To paraphrase Ars Poetica, I’m content with it being, not even worried about the meaning π
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I read that while sitting by the front window looking out at the snowy streets outside. That was brilliant! Loved it!
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Thanks! Would be willing to trade some of this fog for a little bit of snow…
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nice . . . fog inspires me too
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Thanks! it’s certainly atmospheric
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